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米高奧雲

又要麻煩各位師兄幫忙了..小朋友的學校常常做pass exam paper..

米高奧雲

文章開頭用了Tom and his mom...

逗利是佛

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Tom and his Mom wear gloves when they walk to school in a cold morning.

They see a poor cat hiding in a box when they walk past a tree.

Tom looks at the cat.  He sees that poor cat is shaking because of the chilly wind.

Tom tried to reach the cat with his hand, and it barely be able to answer with its little hand.

At the moment two hands are touched, 李思捷 and his crew jump out from the back of the tree and cheer, "Surprise!!"

米高奧雲

逗利是佛 發表於 2013-5-6 04:41

                               
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Tom and his Mom wear gloves when they walk to school in a cold morning.

Ching,對小三學生來說,這個太深了,可否淺D????

pacificlub

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Tom and his mom walk to the school in a cold day.  They see a poor little cat in a box.  Tom feeds it with the milk in his hand and then says goodbye to it.

馬後砲

逗利是佛 發表於 2013-5-6 04:41

                               
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Tom and his Mom wear gloves when they walk to school in a cold morning.

Who is 李思捷 ?  

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馬後砲

Tom and his mom wear scarves on a cold day.  They walk past a shivering cat. Tom looks at it. He takes off his scarf and places it over the cat.

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馬後砲 發表於 2013-5-7 21:58

                               
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Tom and his mom wear scarves on a cold day.  They walk past a shivering cat. Tom looks at it. He tak ...

scarves and shivering 兩個字,對三年級學生來說,好深喎....

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Tom and his mum go to school today. It is very cold. They wear thick coat and scarf. When they walk past a park, it is a poor cat inside the box. Tom feeds the cat with milk. He wants to help the cat. His mother tells him to take the cat to SPCA.

這樣可以嗎??

馬後砲

scarf 在高主教一/二年級教衣服時教過，shivering香港較少杋會學同用

EarlTyro

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What the hell?
i mean... these type of questions arn't helping kids with nurturing their creativity

馬後砲

米高奧雲 發表於 2013-5-8 18:29

                               
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Tom and his mum go to school today. It is very cold. They wear thick coat and scarf. When they walk  ...

好好呀。清楚，利落。
唯一問題系長左DD